Danielle's Freshman Composition Journal

2005-11-09T08:36:00.000-08:00

Jn#31 college

College is fun, and I enjoy all my classes. I have an easy schedule for spring all my classes aren't till the afternoon. I'am getting the hang of college. It wasn't like the beginning of my year were my schedule was all messed up. Now I'am smarter I mad sure my classes were the right classes. Now all I have to worry about is getting all my criedts.

2005-10-31T08:50:00.000-08:00

Jn#30 how to write an essay

In an essay you alway whant to frist brain strom about what you whant to write. Then you would write a rough draft. When you've writen your rough draft you should have some one look at it, and revise it. The essay alway has to capture the reader in the introductory paragraph other wise they won't whant to read. Then you have to write a supporting paragraph to explain in detail of what you wrote in the first paragraph. Finaly you have to write a concluding paragraph to sum up every thing you just said in your essay. Once your done with that you type it up on the computer, and turn it in.

2005-10-31T08:41:00.000-08:00

Jn#29 the best commerical

The best commercial I seen so far would have to be the hummer three commercial. The commerical starts out were there this really ugly monster taking down this city, and when it goes to tare down a building it meets a robot.Then the robot falls in love with the monster and they go on a date around the city. It then goes to this one sceen were the moster is Pregnant and has the baby and it a hummer three and on the bottom it say a little monster. This commercial I thought made no sence and was very radom but funny.

2005-10-30T09:34:00.000-08:00

Jn#28 something you hate about technology

I dont hate technology i just have to learn more about it. It always advancing every day. In class I learnd about black board something I had no idea about. I like this proram very much it fun. I didn't have a e-mail ether till I had make one for class now i use it all the time.

2005-10-30T09:29:00.000-08:00

Jn#27 technology

The one piece of technology I enjoy would have to be my lab top. I like it because you can do anything on it. You could watch dvd, listen to music video's ont the internet. I can bring t any were I go. I also enjoy my cell phone because i text all day . Texting I think was the best Thing to put on a phone.

2005-10-30T09:19:00.000-08:00

Jn#26 free

my cousin is going to the navy and iam very happy for him. He wants to go because he want's to find himself and get some sablity in his live. See in his life now he doesn't get the normal life he diserves. He was always put down by his mother and is still now but he has survied it.

2005-10-14T10:33:00.000-07:00

Jn#25 happyness

When I had been discriminated against and broken down by my ex I felt like I didn't whant to date any more. My friend told me about this guy that she wanted me to meet him and that he was going to go to prom with me. At first I didn't want to because I didn't feel like meeting someone and geeting hurt again but I decided to give him a chance. We then meet for the first time we liked eachother but I wasn't going to russ into a relationship again so we become friends. I got to know him and the more I got to know him the more I liked him. Then one day I heard from my friend that he really liked me and that he wanted to ask me out. Sure enough he asked me the day I came back from a trip. I rember after that I was so happy and we went to prom and it was the best time. We are still together and I am happyer than ever.

2005-10-04T14:58:00.000-07:00

Jn#24 movies

If some on cut in front of me I get a little mad. I'd just tell them that I was first and if they just could please move. If the lined was short then I wouldn't make a big deal out of it. Some people think that if someone cuts in front of them they need to get all mad and get mean. Just like in traffic they think if they cut people off in line that it get them their faster . It takes evey one the same time in a line. No one gets to were they have to get if you get in front of a person that was already there.

2005-10-04T14:37:00.000-07:00

Jn#23 Ice cream cone

If I order an ice cream cone and had no money I ask them to hold it so that I could get some money. If I couldn't get money then I wouldn't have ice cream and give it back. It's not worth me runing out with the ice cream just cause I don't have any money. Ice cream is not that important. You could have Ice cream at any time you wanted. That why it not worth taking from some one else when you could get it any time.

2005-10-03T10:10:00.000-07:00

Jn#22 discrimination

I've been discriminated against by my ex- boyfriend. It was my senior year I started to date this guy and I thought he was great. After the 7 mouth anniversary he started to get wierd. He tell me all these lies he say that his parents didn't like me because I was mexican and they wanted him to brake up with me so that was the first brake up. I was hurting because that a wrong way to break up and I was mad to because I thought they liked me. All of a sudden they didn't like me after 7 mouth and I never gave them a reson to be like that. Then we got back together and it just got worse because he never told his parents that we were dating again and I thought he did. The relationship ended horribly because it was the same thing the parents didn't like me because I was mexican. This time it was diffrent thought because when i would'nt come back to him he got virbaly violent even his sister . She tell me threats and I had to change my phone number. With him every day I walk up the stairs he yell slut or hore at me but he do it when no one was around so I be the only one that would here it or his friends would hear it and they would just go along with it. He hurt me really bad ever day and made sure that every day I would feel bad. he knew that I couldn't do anything because I didnt have whiteness that he was doing this to me. The next day thought I had my friends walk with me because I feard my life and he heard what I had to go through every day. he told me that this was unfair and i had to tell some one about it. When It was toreds the end of the year I had to take a differn't way out of school because of him andd I think he knew wear I was giong because when I came out he was in his car he yelled a reaaly bad word and then just drove off. After that i was tierd of him doing that so I repored it and he stooped but he was never questioned about it at school and they just let him go to do it to another person. Ever since i have tryed to get over it but every once in a while when some one talks about a nother person badly I think of what I went through in high school.

2005-10-03T09:42:00.000-07:00

Jn#21 woke up in another country

If I woke up in a country like germany I think how I get here. Why Iam I here. since I dont know german I be lost. I try to find my way around and in the prosess I would look around to see all the interesting things around germany. I always wanted to go around the world and travel. Then after I looked around I find my way to the airport and leave. When I got home I'd tell ever one about my edventer.

2005-10-03T09:33:00.000-07:00

Jn#20 free writing

Why is it that people like to talk behind your back. I think it piont less because it just going to get to the person your talking about. Let say you whanted it to get back to the person what good what that do because what if you get beat up by the person.Then you would have humiliated your self. that why I think it piont less to talk about people behind there back.

2005-09-26T09:21:00.000-07:00

Jn#19 If I had a bug in my salad.

If I had bugs in my salad I'd freak out. That would be the grosses thing in the world. Who ever made the salad would make me angry. I would of thrown it in the trash. Then I would have never come back there ever again. Now in days people are very careful in what they prepare in Restaurants. We have inspectores go to them before us.

2005-09-19T10:30:00.000-07:00

Jn#18 What gift would I give to the world

The gift i would give to the world would be a better goverment. I give it to the peolple. The gas prices have gone up and the goverment hasn't done anything about it and it only because of greed. Iam only saying to limit the prices. People are having a hard time like people like me . I mean we can get some gas but it put dents in are bank accounts. There alot of things that need to be changed but nothing is done about it. Also people need help like the hurricane people. Are stares are doing a better job then are goverment in helping people. I also give peace.

2005-09-19T09:50:00.000-07:00

Jn# 17 when animals talk

If animals could talk that would be cool. I'd ask my dog why does he scream when I leave the house and put him in the cage? Why does he bite so hard? Why when we say no he doent leasson? when we walk he cokes him self because he wants to go but I don't walk that fast. I also want to ask why does he freakout like run around the house for no reason or when his sister comes over and he doe it and she sits down and just waches him do it. I ask alot of questions.

2005-09-19T09:39:00.000-07:00

Jn#16 No t.v.

If there was no T.v. I would be bord.I usally watch T.v. from the morning and then at night. I even at night fall asleep to the T.v. I think it bad because T.v. a way for me to clam down and lay down. I prouble have to go out more often then I do now.So that way I wouldn't be so bord. It not that bad though I could do other things now since in college I dont have a lot of time to watch T.v. because I have homework then I have a night class. So it wouldn't bother me that bad.

2005-09-19T09:23:00.000-07:00

Jn#15 my trip

In high school my club took a trip to disney land. We all though it be great and it was but not the bus drive or the bus driver. The first time we meet are bus driver he seemed alright. The first day we went to the mall and we wer late. The next day we were sopouse to be at two places the first day the beach and a relly cool place but he got us there late and we got to the beach late on top of that he ran over a curb. Everyone one was not happy. We also had to cancle going to one of the places. Soon we were at the hotel and then we had fun because we all whent to are rooms and started to talk and run around the hallways. Durning when we were trying to get ready for bed this guy knocks and he he ask use for an inhaller. We all look at him wierd because no one in the room had one. Then one of my friends walk past ther room and saw one girl and like five guys that were from anouther school and she wasnt sopouse to be there. The next day they got introuble and we went to disney land. On are way home was bad because the bus driver wouldnt lesoun to are teacher on how to go to are school and he was bed mouthing her. So we only gave him half of his pay because he was so rude.

2005-09-19T09:15:00.000-07:00

Jn#14 Invisible

If I was invisible I have fun with it. I play jokes on my family and friends. I find out what people say about me. I would be able to leason to what people say about anything. I would prouble not do it all the time because then not alot of people would like it. There scared of what they cant see.

2005-09-14T13:14:00.000-07:00

Jn#13 What bugs me?

I hate when I'm walking down the street with my cousin go to get coffee and some guy thinks it ok to yell out his window nice butt. I think thats the most disrespectful and stupid. Some of them even do it at school they think it ok to comment on a girls butt or other areas. I dont like that again it disresepectful and you dont treat women like a piece of meat. I rember when I went down to nogales a man came up to the car and ask "how much are u". That kind of thing bugs me because he just disrespected us and just left.

2005-09-14T10:02:00.000-07:00

Jn#12 What would happen if I could fly

If I could fly I would fly evary where. I fly to get my sister, I get my mom home faster and I go to school every day with out needing a ride. On my spare time I travel the world. one day i go to france then to china, japan,ireland,chicago, alaska. Those countrys Interest me. I fly just to have fun when I am not doing anything. I go vist family and then come home on time. I like to fly and that every should fly because it be easyer but that not reality so it just fun to write about it.

2005-09-12T10:07:00.000-07:00

Jn#11 My favorite book

My favorite books are by an auther who name is Marry higgins Clark. I like reading her books because there mystrey. Mystrey storys are my favorite because you never know what's going to happen next or who the killer. So u just whant to keep reading it. Those kind of books are the best especially when at the end you think you know the killer is but it someone totally different. She is very good at ending the storie with a great twist.

2005-09-12T09:49:00.000-07:00

Jn#10 mexico

I always like when my family and I go down to mexico. my grandma is down there and so are all my cousins from my mom's side. Its fun because every time we go down there the family get toghter and we talk about what new has been going on. I get togher with my older cousins and go out with them and have fun. on my 18th birthday they took me to my frist club it was alot of fun. I also have little cousins that are around 13 to 14 and I hangout with them. I like to talk to them to find out if there doing good in school or if anyone is bother them. I like to help them out whenever I can.

2005-09-08T14:55:00.000-07:00

Jn#9 The best advice I received

The best advice I ever received was to prusue my dreams. My parents always made me believe I could do anything if I just set my mind to it.They would also say to never gave up. My dream is to become a teacher. I have been reaching my goal to become a teacher. Now iam in college prusuing my dream and haveing the confedenice that I'll make it.

2005-09-08T14:49:00.000-07:00

Jn#8 What my favoirte song is

I have alot of favoirte songs. I like music alot. I always have it in the car and playing in my room.If I had to choose it would have to be this song The bad touch. I like this song because it funny like me it very up beat. It a song that I can drive around and have fun.

2005-09-08T14:39:00.000-07:00

Jn#7 My most indipensable possesion

My indipensable possesion would have to be my cell phone. once I left it in my boyfriends car and relized I use it very often. I like useing text message alot to talk to people. it a way of gatting an answer with out having to call them. If i really need to say something that long and i dont whant to use my text message then i call them. My phone is always with me so that anyone from my family can reach me. If I didnt have it iI don't know what i do.

2005-09-05T14:34:00.000-07:00

Jn#6 difficulties I faced while coming to schoool

I had many difficulties. One of them was I had to change my scedule twice. My class got chanceled. I had to go to my advisor twice. I also had diffculties exchanging my book because it was a book that they dont even sell anymore. i had gotten that book when i first registered for fall. the women who got it for me said it was the right one. i had to exchange the book because of my canceld class and i didn't know I need a differnt book till I went to my new class. so that was my many difficulties so far going to school.

2005-09-05T14:28:00.000-07:00

Jn#5 Something I noticed about me.

At home when Iam bored and I domt want to watch t.v. I clean my room. I find alot of things I handn't seen since I was a child. It was fun going trough stuff. I also found pictures of when i was a baby i had like two full picture books of them.

2005-09-05T14:20:00.000-07:00

Jn#4 Something I noticed about myself today

I noticed today that usually when i get home I make sure all my homework is done. I read for a while and study. At night I get all my books for the next class ready and then start all over over again.

2005-08-31T14:41:00.000-07:00

Jn#3 Things I do when bord

When I am bord I like to go to movies or go to the mall. I like to be out and about when Iam board. Sometimes I do things with my family. We go to fairs, movies, mall, trip and even just stay home my uncle cooks and they watch a game thats on.I also like to play with my dog becks. he runs around really fast because he still a puppy so he doesnt play nice but he fun to play with.

2005-08-31T14:32:00.000-07:00

Jn#2 My Hero

My hero is my mom. I think she's a hero because she goes to work then comes home and raises my sister and I at the same time and my little sister can be a handfull sometimes. Then she makes sure I get to school on time. She helps us both with homework if we need it. She always is happy and up beat. This is why she my hero.

2005-08-31T14:17:00.000-07:00

Jn#1 About myself

My name is Danielle I am 18 years old. I have a five year old sister that goes to kindergarden. My faviorte thing to do is to go to movies with my boyfriend and spend time with my family. I also love children. I would like to become a kindergarden or preschool teacher. I love to sit down with children and interact with them. in my high school I was a student teacher at the preschool next to my school. We would do all shorts of activiets it was great.